Wednesday 11 June 2014

Our tree writing

Timber! Timber! The branch hit the school. It was scary. Me, Sophie and Nicole were screaming when the branch hit the school.
By Cassie

Crash! Bang! It looked like a tornado when the tree came down. ZZzzzz went the chainsaw. “Timber” yelled Romahapa School.
By Finn

Wow! Yesterday some men were cutting a tree down and it was huge. Everyone was screaming and laughing.
By Xavier

Bang! Crash! Boom! The tree is falling down like a jet and a branch hit the office roof.
By Max

It was like a tornado when the tree came down. Crash! Bang! The girls screamed because it swept the people up too.
By Nga

Timber! Zzzzz. Crash, boom. The tree is gigantic. Some fell on the school. “Eeee” creaked the tree.
By Cooper

Crash! Bang! Ahhh. Sticks hit the school. Zzzz went the chainsaw. People giggled and screamed. The man chopping down the tree has special boots.

By Hunter

1 comment:

  1. Wow great writing guys. I especially like your onomatopoeias!!!
    I heard some screaming from some little boys too!

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