Timber! Timber! The branch hit the school. It was scary. Me,
Sophie and Nicole were screaming when the branch hit the school.
By Cassie
Crash! Bang! It looked like a tornado when the tree came
down. ZZzzzz went the chainsaw. “Timber” yelled Romahapa School.
By Finn
Wow! Yesterday some men were cutting a tree down and it was
huge. Everyone was screaming and laughing.
By Xavier
Bang! Crash! Boom! The tree is falling down like a jet and a
branch hit the office roof.
By Max
It was like a tornado when the tree came down. Crash! Bang!
The girls screamed because it swept the people up too.
By Nga
Timber! Zzzzz. Crash, boom. The tree is gigantic. Some fell
on the school. “Eeee” creaked the tree.
By Cooper
Crash! Bang! Ahhh. Sticks hit the school. Zzzz went the
chainsaw. People giggled and screamed. The man chopping down the tree has
special boots.
By Hunter
Wow great writing guys. I especially like your onomatopoeias!!!
ReplyDeleteI heard some screaming from some little boys too!