Marshmallow Monster

Today for writing we were learning how to describe using adjectives and similes. We watched a video about a monster and then described him.

Click the link below to watch the video
Marshmallow monster video




"Oh no" said the boy. Here is a monster! He's got spooky eyes and furious teeth. By Sam O

Watch out James! A big bumpy monster which is like a sea dragon is behind you. It will gobble you up and spit you out. It will sneak up with his creepy eyes. The monster is really, really hungry. His eyes are yellow. By Daniel

Look out, watch out! The monster is grumpy. He is hungry for marshmallows and meat. I wonder if the monster is going to eat you up. He has ears like dragon wings. By Emily

A humongous monster is going to eat you! By Mac

Grr, grr... look watch out! There is a slimy monster behind you, it has sharp teeth and it's eyes are yellow and bright. Its body is fat and his arms are humungous. The monsters ears are pointy and black. The monster is getting closer...and closer...and closer!
By Mykaelah

Watch out, don't be about on a spooky night. The humongous monster is behind you. His head is like a marshmallow. It is a sea monster with eyes like burning fire. His teeth are like a vampires and his body is all bumpy. My Max