Thursday 3 August 2017

The Sky Journey

HELP! Junior Room can you please help these "sick sentences". Comment below to improve these sentences:



  • The flying ship went through the clouds.
  • Sam felt scared on the ship. 


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4 comments:

  1. The ship went through the noisy wind, it was so colorful. Sam zoomed through the

    blue sky like a bird by Annabelle Wilson.

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  2. The ship was like a plane zooming!Though the air. Sam was terrified and he went inside the ships cabin. By Kelsie

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  3. The ship went through the evil red lightening clouds. When sam noticed he was flying so... he fell off the ship. by Slade.

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  4. The ship went up and up and up through the rainbow to the clouds. SAM was terrified of heights. by Isla

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